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Dastak Part 1

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Dastak Part 1

Post by shelly on Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:50 am

Woh Sunkar Thak Chuke Hai Ab Meri Baatein
Oob Chuke Hai Ginkar Meri Aansuon Ki Boonde
Kehte Hai Iss Choti Si Baat Pe Kya Rona
Sochti Hoon Main Yeh Mera Dil Hai Ya Hai Khilona
Jaanti Hoon Kam Unka Pyar Bhi Nahi Hai
Phir Bhi Iss Dil Pe Mera Ikhtiyaar Nahi Hai
Jis Waqt Nikal Gaya Mere Vishwas Ka Janaaza
Bandh Kar Liya Maine Iss Dil Ka Darwaaza
Phir Bhi Yeh Dastak Mujhe Karde Hai Beqaabu
Na Chahte Hue Bhi Darwaaza Mai Kholoon
Muskuraoon Aur Unhi Ka Chehra Niharoon
Unn Sang Haans Loon Phir Baith Kar Ro Loon
Zakhm Hara Hai Abhi Bhara Toh Nahi Hai
Chain Ka Badal Mann Ko Ghera Bhi Nahi Hai
Aise Mein Yeh Dastak Mujhe Kar Deti Hai Durbal
Nafrat Ki Aandhi Mein Yeh Dil Hua Bekal
Har Baar Thaan Leti Hoon Yeh Aansuon Ka Hai Daldal
Dukh Sukh Ke Iss Jung Mein Na Hona Mujhe Shamil
Ab Phir Darwaaza Dil Ka Na Kholoongi
Iss Baar Milne Pe Pehle Mai Na Bolungi
Iss Baar Toh Pakka Iraada Hai Mera
Meri Kaali Raaton Ka Ek Ujwal Sawera
Na Rahega Baans Na Bajegi Bansuri
Apne Armaano Pe Khood Chala Loon Mai Chhuri
Apna Maana Hai Tabhi Toh Yeh Diqqat Hai
Wahi Agar Bhool Jaun Toh Phir Kiski Himmat Hai
Woh Kuch Bhi Karle Unki Hai Niji Baat
Usme Dhakal Dun Mai Meri Kya Aukaad
Itne Mein Sunayi De Raha Hai Khat Khat
Shaq Nahi Yaqeen Hai Yeh Unki Hai Dastak
Padhne Walo Zara Thehro Mai Aayi
Unko Mana Ke Bas Ik Pal Mein Aayi


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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:37 am

bahut hi umda bahut accha likhti ho aap shellym +k sweet heart , keep going
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by shelly on Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:34 pm

Tanvi Ji hum aapka tahe dilse shukriya ada karte hai.
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:06 pm

yaar shelly, awesum , superb, luvly, beautiful... ye sab words use kar k ab ho gaya, ab kya khaun yaar... welll jo b I m stealing thios shayari of ur..... flowers even if U mind Toungy so dun mind haan.... n keep writing yaar.... tooo good 4 words.... clap 2 a +K given needless to say
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by shelly on Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:35 pm

Hey Raj what can I say I will not say thank you anymore but I do feel honored by the way u praised my shayari and it's my pleasure if u wud like to add it to ur collection and as I said there is more to it I shall post it soon just trying to find the right words .
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:42 pm

sure do try buddy, but try more quick... lolzz jus kiddig... I'll b waitng for itz 2nd part.... Thums up have lods fun till than... flowers
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:26 pm

superb one +K
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:28 pm

Nafrat ki aandhi mein bhi pyar ka saaya hai,
o hum-nashin tu hi is dil pe samaya hai,
kese karu me parda apni zindagani se,
jismo ko chuta hua pyar saanso me aya hai

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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by shelly on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:17 pm

Tum Jo Pal Bhar ko Thehro Toh Yeh Lamhe Bhi
Aane Wale Kayi Lamhon Ki Amanat Ho Jayen
Tum Jo Thehro To Yeh Raat, Yeh Mahtaab
Yeh Sabz Aur Yeh Gulab Hum Dono Ke Khwaab
Sabke Sab Aise Mubham Hon Ki Haqeeqat Ho Jayen
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:45 pm

ye pal bas yahi theher jaye aaj,
tu saans bankar meri aaho me aaye aaj,
keher barsega har ehsas se pyar ka,
hotho se dil tak sirf tu muskuraye aaj

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Dastak part 2

Post by shelly on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:06 pm

Hey friends here is the 2nd half of my poem Dastak.

Aise Mein yeh Datsk Mujhe Kar Deti Hai Durbal
Nafrat Ki Aandhi Mein Yeh Dil Hua Bekal....

Har Baar Thaan Leti Hoon Yeh Aansuon Ka Hai Daldal
Dukh Sukh Ke Iss Jung Mein Na Hona Mujhe Shamil
Ab Phir Darwaaza Dil Ka Na Kholoongi
Iss Baar Milne Pe Pehle Mai Na Bolungi
Iss Baar Toh Pakka Iraada Hai Mera
Meri Kaali Raaton Ka Ek Ujwal Sawera
Na Rahega Baans Na Bajegi Bansuri
Apne Armaano Pe Khood Chala Loon Mai Chhuri
Apna Maana Hai Tabhi Toh Yeh Diqqat Hai
Wahi Agar Bhool Jaun Toh Phir Kiski Himmat Hai
Woh Kuch Bhi Karle Unki Hai Niji Baat
Usme Dhakal Dun Mai Meri Kya Aukaad
Itne Mein Sunayi De Raha Hai Khat Khat
Shaq Nahi Yaqeen Hai Yeh Unki Hai Dastak
Padhne Walo Zara Thehro Mai Aayi
Unko Mana Ke Bas Ik Pal Mein Aayi
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:08 pm

lovely words shelly ji
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:08 pm

hazaro me khushi ka fasane nahi milta,
hume jane kyu tujhse pyaar karne ka bahana nahi milta,
khoi rehti hai nigahe kisi ke intezar me aksar,
in nigaho ko bas unka aashiyana nahi milta
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:22 am

awesum, cant even start to measure itz depth.... a +K added for this... Thums up, a small request shelly... can u put both the parts in 1 thread, in this thread I think ?? so we can read it easily, and the continuity is also there... it's just a suggetion...
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by shelly on Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:33 am

Raj I wanted to actually ask u how to do that bcoz I know it would be easy to read the whole thread at one time if u can help me out on this one pls, or maybe you can do it for me. Thanks
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Re: Dastak Part 1

Post by Guest on Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:40 am

sure I'll merge d threads wink , dat will b perfect agree

[Both parts of the thread merged -Baba]

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