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Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by sagar......dard ka on Sat May 08, 2010 5:53 pm


Khud Ko Iss Dil Mein Basaane Ki Ijaazat De Do
Mujh Ko Tum Apna Banaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Tum Meri Zindagi Ka Ek Haseen Lamha Ho
Phoolon Se Khud Ko Sajaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Main Kitna Chaahta Hu Kis Tarah Bataaun tumhein
Mujhe Ye Aaj Bataane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Tumhari Raat Si Zulfon Mein Chand Sa Chehra
Mujhe Yeh Shaam Sajaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Mujhe Qaid Kar Lo Apne Ishq Mein
Yeh Jaan Tum Pe Lutaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Nahin Hai Shauk mujhe koi, TUJHKO Bhoolne Ka Magar
Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do



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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sat May 08, 2010 6:31 pm

apke jawab me sagar sahab choti sa tohfa

Mujhko bhulane ki koshish na kar ae rahgeer
Tum mere bina saans bhi na le paoge
me hawa hu khusbu daman me liye firti hu
Tere rag rag me sirf me hi me basti hu
Mujhe bhul kar jeena asaan na hoga
mera bina tera jeena shamshan sa hoga
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sat May 08, 2010 9:01 pm

bahut khoob sagarji aur tanvi dear
keep it up
+K for both of u clap 2
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sat May 08, 2010 9:14 pm

kya baat hai sagar nice 1 n nice going Tanvi too Thums up keep itup... Thums up
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 12:19 am

thanx a lot raj dear
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by sagar......dard ka on Sun May 09, 2010 12:20 am

clap 2 clap 2 clap 2 clap 2

nice one TANVI JI.............


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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by sagar......dard ka on Sun May 09, 2010 12:21 am

Tanvi wrote:apke jawab me sagar sahab choti sa tohfa

Mujhko bhulane ki koshish na kar ae rahgeer
Tum mere bina saans bhi na le paoge
me hawa hu khusbu daman me liye firti hu
Tere rag rag me sirf me hi me basti hu
Mujhe bhul kar jeena asaan na hoga
mera bina tera jeena shamshan sa hoga


ek chhota sa jawaab main bhi dene ki gustaakhi kar raha hu TANVI ji aapke saamne (((waise to main aapke barabar kahin nahi thaharta, is gustakhi ke liye maaf kijiyega........)))



Ya AAP pattharon se muhabbat na kijiye
ya dil ke aaeine ki hifajat na kijiye
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YOON TOOT KAR KISI PE INAYAT NA KIJIYE...................!!!!!!!!
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 1:15 am

janab apke jawab me main youn kahungi

Laakh tukde ho jaye aaeine ke
aks utne hi nazar aayenge
chaman kitna bhi chupale
apne daman me khusboo
mohabaat ke diwane
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Angel_Drishne on Sun May 09, 2010 1:33 am

@sagar......dard ka wrote:
Khud Ko Iss Dil Mein Basaane Ki Ijaazat De Do
Mujh Ko Tum Apna Banaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Tum Meri Zindagi Ka Ek Haseen Lamha Ho
Phoolon Se Khud Ko Sajaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Main Kitna Chaahta Hu Kis Tarah Bataaun tumhein
Mujhe Ye Aaj Bataane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Tumhari Raat Si Zulfon Mein Chand Sa Chehra
Mujhe Yeh Shaam Sajaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Mujhe Qaid Kar Lo Apne Ishq Mein
Yeh Jaan Tum Pe Lutaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Nahin Hai Shauk mujhe koi, TUJHKO Bhoolne Ka Magar
Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do


wah wah ji kiya bat hai ur reply swetty

Dil ka dard tum samajh na sake,
Humare dil ko yaaad kar na sake

Dooriyon se farq nahi padta,
Baat to dilon ke nazdikiyon se hoti hai,

Suna hai kisi gair ne ye khabar udai hogi,
Ek din meri bhi aapse judai hogi,

Panchi keh rahe hai ki hum chaman chod denge,
aur sitare keh rahe hai ki hum gagan chod denge,
agar tere ishq mein mai mar bhi jau ae sanam,
tum dilse pukar lena hum kafan chod denge.



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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 2:10 am

Nice going Sagar n Nans ... clap 2

Patthar ke jigar valon gham mein vo ravani hai,
Khud raah bana lega bahata hua pani hai,

Phuulon mein gazal rakhna ye raat ki rani hai,
Iss mein teri zulfon ki berabt kahani hai,

Ek zahan-e-parenshan mein vo phool sa chehara hai,
Patthar ki hifazat mein shishe ki javani hai,

Kyon chandani raaton mein dariya pe nahate ho,
Soye hue paani mein kya aag lagani hai,

Is hausala-e-dil par ham ne bhi kafan pahana,
Hans kar koi puchega kya jaan gavani hai,

Rone ka asar dil par rah rah ke badalata hai,
Aansu kabhi shisha hai aansu kabhi pani hai,

Ye shabanami lahaja hai aahista gazal padhana,
Titali ki kahani hai phulon ki zabani hai...
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Daisy on Sun May 09, 2010 12:20 pm

Thums up clap 2 clap 2 very nice thread sagar ji nice lines Rajdear,,nancy dear,,tanvi dear.. flowers flowers flowers

Teri rehmaton k dayaar mein, teray badlon ko pata nahi
Abhi aaag sard hui nahi, abhi ik alao mujha nahi

Meri bazm-e-dil tau ujer chuki, mera farsh-e-jaan tau simat chuka
Sabhi ja chukey meray ham nasheen, mager aik shakhs gya nahi

Dar-o-baam sab ne saja liey, sabhi roshni mein naha liey
Meri unglian bhi jhulas gayein, mager ik charagh jala nahi

Gham-e-zindagi teri rah mein,shab-e-aarzoo teri chah mein
Jo ujer gya wo basa nahi, jo bicher gya wo mila nahi

Jo dil-o-nazer ka saroor tha, MEray pass reh k bhi door tha
Wohi ik gulaab umeed ka, meri shaakh-e-jaan pay khila nahi

Pas-e-karvaan, ser-e-rehguzer mein shakasta paa hoon tau is liey
keh kadam tau sab ne mila liey, mera dil kisi se mila nahi

MEra hamsafer jo ajeeb hai tau ajeeb ter hoon mein aap bhi
Mujhey manzilon ki khaber nahi, usey raaston ka pata nahi


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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 12:36 pm

keep going guys
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by sagar......dard ka on Sun May 09, 2010 12:43 pm


wow Daisy.........very very beautiful lines.........

" Mera hamsafer jo ajeeb hai tau ajeeb ter hoon mein aap bhi
Mujhey manzilon ki khaber nahi, usey raaston ka pata nahi............."

Masha-Allah.........kya baat hai in alfazon mein....dil ko chhu si gayi hain...

a +K for U Daisy for this........
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Post by sagar......dard ka on Sun May 09, 2010 1:05 pm

@Baba wrote:Nice going Sagar n Nans ... clap 2

Patthar ke jigar valon gham mein vo ravani hai,
Khud raah bana lega bahata hua pani hai,

Phuulon mein gazal rakhna ye raat ki rani hai,
Iss mein teri zulfon ki berabt kahani hai,

Ek zahan-e-parenshan mein vo phool sa chehara hai,
Patthar ki hifazat mein shishe ki javani hai,

Kyon chandani raaton mein dariya pe nahate ho,
Soye hue paani mein kya aag lagani hai,

Is hausala-e-dil par ham ne bhi kafan pahana,
Hans kar koi puchega kya jaan gavani hai,

Rone ka asar dil par rah rah ke badalata hai,
Aansu kabhi shisha hai aansu kabhi pani hai,

Ye shabanami lahaja hai aahista gazal padhana,
Titali ki kahani hai phulon ki zabani hai...






guru ji .......bahut khoobsurat hai aapki ye gazal, padh kar bas maza aa gaya....
well, aapke gazal to hamesha chhu jaate hain, isiliye to AAPKO guru maana hai..........!!!!
ek chhota sa jawaab mera bhi........


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Mausam bhi beimaan hai, ye andaaz mil gaya,
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Patthar mujhe kehta hai, Mera Chaahne wala,
ARRE.....Main MOM hu, usne mujhe chhu kar nahi dekha............!!!"


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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 1:18 pm

waah tanvi superb yaar
keep going
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 2:44 pm

Lolzz sagar ye to ap ka pyar n baddapan hai...

Vo koi aur na tha chand khushk patte the,
Shajar se toot ke jo fasl-e-gul pe roye the,

Abhi abhi tumhein socha to kuch na yaad aaya,
Abhi abhi to ham ek dusre se bichade the,

Tumhare baad chaman par jab ik nazar daali,
Kali kali mein khizaan ke chiraag jalate the,

Tamaam umr wafa ke gunaahgar rahe,
Ye aur baat ki ham aadami to achchhe the,

Shab-e-khamosh ko tanhai ne zabaan de di,
Pahad gunjate the dasht san-sanate the,

Vo ek baar mare jin ko tha hayaat se pyar,
Jo zindagi se gurezaan the roz marate the,

Naye khayal ab aate hai dhal ke zahan mein,
Hamare dil mein kabhi khet lah-lahate the,

Ye iratiqa ka chalan hai ki har zamane mein,
Purane log naye aadami se darate the,

Jo bhi mulaqat thi adhuri thi,
Hamare ek chehare ke piche hazaar chehare the...



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shab-e-Khaamosh=silent night;
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gurezaan=to run away from
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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 7:06 pm


Umer Bhar Yehi Malaal Raha
Tera Jawab Mere Waastay Sawal Raha

Jo Ik Pal Kay Bicharnay Ko Maut Kehta Tha
Mere Bagher Bhi Zinda Hazaron Saal Raha

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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by sagar......dard ka on Sun May 09, 2010 10:12 pm


wow Guru ji aur Tanvi.... bahut bahut khoob......
kya baat hai, yahaan to shaayaro ki mehfil si jamti ja rahi hai.....
maine bhi abhi-abhi ik gazal likhi hai, ummeed hai ki aap sab ko thodi bahut pasand aayegi




Meri hassi ka gila yaar karte hain,
kehte hai tere dil-vich gam kya hai?
wo muhabbat hi nahi ki jisme
aankh kisi ke liye royi na ho,
maine kaha iss ishq me ham kaise chot khaaye baithe hain,
aa jao main tumhe bhi sikha dunga,
jo aietbaar nahi mere dil pe tumko,
aa jao, apne jakhm dikha dunga,
haar kar is pyaar me ham,
hasi ke peeche gam ko chhupaaye baithe hain,
ek jindagi ka tum karte ho gila ???
kisi ki judayi me ham, saato-janm lutaaye baithe hain.....!!!!


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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Angel_Drishne on Sun May 09, 2010 10:48 pm


Ik rasm muhabbat hae yeh reet nibha dete,
Kuchh der wafa karte phir chahe dagha dete,

Yeh raat ke sannate ab mujh ko satate haen,
In ghour andheron mein ik sham jala dete,

Ghayal na kiya tum ne nazron se kabhi apni,
Kuchh aise tarrapte hum aakash hila dete,

Haq chheen liya tum ne is dil ke tarrapne ka,
Hum dard e muhabbat ko taqdeer bana dete,

Gulshan yeh mere dil ka maanoos hae shulon se,
In bujhte shararon ko halki si hawa dete,

Naasih na bana koi sehra e muhabbat mein,
Yoon dard ki raahon mein khud ko na mita dete,

Phir wasl ki ummeedein jaagi haen mere mann mein,
Phir haath uttha dete marne ki dua dete



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Re: Mujhe Ye Duniya Bhulaane Ki Ijaazat De Do

Post by Guest on Sun May 09, 2010 11:09 pm

Har pal thoda aur dil me utarte jate ho,
kareeb aata hu to aur door chale jate ho,

Door se karke aakhon se ishare muskurate ho,
Haaye jaana iss dil ko kitna lubhate ho,

Mujhe jalane gairo se karte ho baatein,
Iss dil pe kithne sitam dahye jate ho,

Mann lagta hi hai kahin kaam mein,
To aake mujhe yaad fir chedd jate ho,

Ek ham hai ke aap pe marne ke bahane dhundhte hai,
Ek aap ho ke "Raj" ko jeene ki duayein diye jate ho...



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