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    Post by shelly Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:50 am

    Woh Sunkar Thak Chuke Hai Ab Meri Baatein
    Oob Chuke Hai Ginkar Meri Aansuon Ki Boonde
    Kehte Hai Iss Choti Si Baat Pe Kya Rona
    Sochti Hoon Main Yeh Mera Dil Hai Ya Hai Khilona
    Jaanti Hoon Kam Unka Pyar Bhi Nahi Hai
    Phir Bhi Iss Dil Pe Mera Ikhtiyaar Nahi Hai
    Jis Waqt Nikal Gaya Mere Vishwas Ka Janaaza
    Bandh Kar Liya Maine Iss Dil Ka Darwaaza
    Phir Bhi Yeh Dastak Mujhe Karde Hai Beqaabu
    Na Chahte Hue Bhi Darwaaza Mai Kholoon
    Muskuraoon Aur Unhi Ka Chehra Niharoon
    Unn Sang Haans Loon Phir Baith Kar Ro Loon
    Zakhm Hara Hai Abhi Bhara Toh Nahi Hai
    Chain Ka Badal Mann Ko Ghera Bhi Nahi Hai
    Aise Mein Yeh Dastak Mujhe Kar Deti Hai Durbal
    Nafrat Ki Aandhi Mein Yeh Dil Hua Bekal
    Har Baar Thaan Leti Hoon Yeh Aansuon Ka Hai Daldal
    Dukh Sukh Ke Iss Jung Mein Na Hona Mujhe Shamil
    Ab Phir Darwaaza Dil Ka Na Kholoongi
    Iss Baar Milne Pe Pehle Mai Na Bolungi
    Iss Baar Toh Pakka Iraada Hai Mera
    Meri Kaali Raaton Ka Ek Ujwal Sawera
    Na Rahega Baans Na Bajegi Bansuri
    Apne Armaano Pe Khood Chala Loon Mai Chhuri
    Apna Maana Hai Tabhi Toh Yeh Diqqat Hai
    Wahi Agar Bhool Jaun Toh Phir Kiski Himmat Hai
    Woh Kuch Bhi Karle Unki Hai Niji Baat
    Usme Dhakal Dun Mai Meri Kya Aukaad
    Itne Mein Sunayi De Raha Hai Khat Khat
    Shaq Nahi Yaqeen Hai Yeh Unki Hai Dastak
    Padhne Walo Zara Thehro Mai Aayi
    Unko Mana Ke Bas Ik Pal Mein Aayi


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    Post by Guest Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:37 am

    bahut hi umda bahut accha likhti ho aap shellym Dastak Part 1 885599 Dastak Part 1 885599 +k sweet heart , keep going
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    Post by shelly Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:34 pm

    Tanvi Ji hum aapka tahe dilse shukriya ada karte hai.
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    Post by Guest Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:06 pm

    yaar shelly, awesum , superb, luvly, beautiful... ye sab words use kar k ab ho gaya, ab kya khaun yaar... welll jo b I m stealing thios shayari of ur..... flowers even if U mind Toungy so dun mind haan.... n keep writing yaar.... tooo good 4 words.... clap 2 a +K given needless to say
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    Post by shelly Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:35 pm

    Hey Raj what can I say I will not say thank you anymore but I do feel honored by the way u praised my shayari and it's my pleasure if u wud like to add it to ur collection and as I said there is more to it I shall post it soon just trying to find the right words .
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    Post by Guest Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:42 pm

    sure do try buddy, but try more quick... lolzz jus kiddig... I'll b waitng for itz 2nd part.... Thums up have lods fun till than... flowers
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    Post by Guest Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:26 pm

    superb one +K
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    Post by Guest Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:28 pm

    Nafrat ki aandhi mein bhi pyar ka saaya hai,
    o hum-nashin tu hi is dil pe samaya hai,
    kese karu me parda apni zindagani se,
    jismo ko chuta hua pyar saanso me aya hai
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    Post by shelly Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:17 pm

    Tum Jo Pal Bhar ko Thehro Toh Yeh Lamhe Bhi
    Aane Wale Kayi Lamhon Ki Amanat Ho Jayen
    Tum Jo Thehro To Yeh Raat, Yeh Mahtaab
    Yeh Sabz Aur Yeh Gulab Hum Dono Ke Khwaab
    Sabke Sab Aise Mubham Hon Ki Haqeeqat Ho Jayen
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    Post by Guest Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:45 pm

    ye pal bas yahi theher jaye aaj,
    tu saans bankar meri aaho me aaye aaj,
    keher barsega har ehsas se pyar ka,
    hotho se dil tak sirf tu muskuraye aaj
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    Post by shelly Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:06 pm

    Hey friends here is the 2nd half of my poem Dastak.

    Aise Mein yeh Datsk Mujhe Kar Deti Hai Durbal
    Nafrat Ki Aandhi Mein Yeh Dil Hua Bekal....

    Har Baar Thaan Leti Hoon Yeh Aansuon Ka Hai Daldal
    Dukh Sukh Ke Iss Jung Mein Na Hona Mujhe Shamil
    Ab Phir Darwaaza Dil Ka Na Kholoongi
    Iss Baar Milne Pe Pehle Mai Na Bolungi
    Iss Baar Toh Pakka Iraada Hai Mera
    Meri Kaali Raaton Ka Ek Ujwal Sawera
    Na Rahega Baans Na Bajegi Bansuri
    Apne Armaano Pe Khood Chala Loon Mai Chhuri
    Apna Maana Hai Tabhi Toh Yeh Diqqat Hai
    Wahi Agar Bhool Jaun Toh Phir Kiski Himmat Hai
    Woh Kuch Bhi Karle Unki Hai Niji Baat
    Usme Dhakal Dun Mai Meri Kya Aukaad
    Itne Mein Sunayi De Raha Hai Khat Khat
    Shaq Nahi Yaqeen Hai Yeh Unki Hai Dastak
    Padhne Walo Zara Thehro Mai Aayi
    Unko Mana Ke Bas Ik Pal Mein Aayi
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    Post by Guest Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:08 pm

    lovely words shelly ji
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    Post by Guest Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:08 pm

    hazaro me khushi ka fasane nahi milta,
    hume jane kyu tujhse pyaar karne ka bahana nahi milta,
    khoi rehti hai nigahe kisi ke intezar me aksar,
    in nigaho ko bas unka aashiyana nahi milta
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    Post by Guest Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:22 am

    awesum, cant even start to measure itz depth.... a +K added for this... Thums up, a small request shelly... can u put both the parts in 1 thread, in this thread I think ?? so we can read it easily, and the continuity is also there... it's just a suggetion...
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    Post by shelly Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:33 am

    Raj I wanted to actually ask u how to do that bcoz I know it would be easy to read the whole thread at one time if u can help me out on this one pls, or maybe you can do it for me. Thanks
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    Post by Guest Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:40 am

    sure I'll merge d threads wink , dat will b perfect agree

    [Both parts of the thread merged -Baba]
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