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Post by Daisy on Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:41 pm

Unhe kya pata humen kitna gham hai
Unki yaadon mein tadapte humari aankhein num hai
Woh toh jeeye jaa rahe hai aapne andaaz mein
Unhe koi kese samjhaye ke is dil me kitne zakham hai








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New Re: **Unhe Kya Pata**

Post by Guest on Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:47 pm

daisy ji i luv the feel u hv written
kya me last line ko kuch change kar sakta hu
i wan give +K but last line k karan superb word use karunga +K ki jagah
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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:48 pm

Unhe kya pata hume kitna gham hai
Unki yado mein tadapte humari aankhe num hai
Wo to jiye ja rahe hai aapne andaaz me
Unhe koi kese samjhaye ke is dil me kitne zakham hai
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Post by Daisy on Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:53 pm

ASHU JI NICE LINES U HAVE EDITED
NO PROBLEM ITS OK THANKS FOR CORRECTIING THOSE LINES SHUKRIYA AAPKA...


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Post by Guest on Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:55 pm

pleasure is mine daisy ji
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Post by Daisy on Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:16 pm

kismat mein unka pyar na likha tha
dil mein joh arzoo hai woh adhura tha
ab jeena bhi humse gawara nahi
mere kismat mein sirf aansu likha tha


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